I finally beat my first game today. It was pretty fun, and basically i just wanted to give my thoughts on it. the advice from the 'how far can a Mesby take me' thread helped out a lot, especially at the last battle.
As an aside (I'm sure most of you already know this)Never give your lancemate a really expensive mecha, as they will most likely have it totaled by the end of their next fight. My first lancemate went through 3-4 Buru Buru's, 2 Ramuh, 1 Custom Vadel, and a Phoenix before she finally got killed. This turned out to be a good thing as 2-3 missions later I had an insanely overpowered lancemate (she had a 14 in mecha piloting. AND EVERYTHING ELSE) with a Savin and from that point on it was just us owning everything.
The story itself seemed pretty coherent. Some things that I thought were weird, though.
-At one point my nemesis/rival became friends with me. I was like 'sweet, now we will obviously team up to fight against a greater evil!', Until in the very next episode I ended up killing her friend. Seems pretty animesque to me.

-I convinced the dude that she sent to kill her ex to leave him alone. Never saw him again. Intentional?
-Convinced yet another girl not to fight me, who became my friend. Was expecting her to disappear like the last guy, but I ended up fighting her anyway later on, and at the final battle. There was an option asking her to join me during the convincing..would that have worked?
-Once when i was limping back to the spinner I got attacked by my nemesis. I pretty much decided I was screwed until her ex and some other dude showed up to fight. That was epic.
-Was my (second) lancemate supposed to be vastly superior to me in every way? She seemed a bit TOO good for that to be intentional.
-Ending. Did not manage to off my nemesis. Found it funny that the queen got pissed and decided to try and kill her instead of me for absolutely demolishing her forces. Guess there won't be a second season to my epic tale )=
Anyway, great work. Can't wait to see how this game improves.